Wow! What fabulous feedback. I can't thank you enough for taking the time to read with such care and taking so much trouble over letting me know which parts you enjoyed. I really really appreciate it. (And I'm sorry I only just saw this!) You have made my day!

And, yes, indeed, that is nicked straight from the Casefiles. (I also like some of the particularly slashy deleted lines that are mentioned in it.) :)