Yeah, I did get the impression that Angel was larger than life here. Especially when he jumped out the window, black coat flapping and all... the epitome of coolness *g* But it made Wes happy so I was happy for him :)

As for your OFC, they're very well done. I especially like how you described Alice's room, how everything just seemed to be waiting for her to get back. I really felt the grief of her loss, she seemed very real to me :)