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lyr ([personal profile] lyr) wrote in [personal profile] elgrey 2008-03-27 11:07 am (UTC)

Mmm, delicious. You do some really satisfying things with characterization and voice and intimacy here, and I just love some of your turns of phrase, too. Plus, there's a perfect blend of hot and sweet here. Lovely work!

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