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elgrey
2005-10-19 11:11 pm (UTC)
the nitpicking American strikes again
a couple more British/American notes:
Cordelia would probably use smarter, instead of cleverer, cute instead of twee (I actually had to look up twee), and Junior High is for 11-14 year-olds.
Very good story!
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the nitpicking American strikes again
Cordelia would probably use smarter, instead of cleverer, cute instead of twee (I actually had to look up twee), and Junior High is for 11-14 year-olds.
Very good story!