Okay, I stayed up waaaay too late trying to finish reading this last night...best WaT story I've read, hands down! You nailed every character.
I loved the team's banter - Martin, Sam, & Danny in Part 2 had me laughing so hard I was glad I wasn't reading at work. I also enjoyed the description of Martin's ties as "a particularly drab acid trip."
The action was great - everything flowed quite nicely, the clues doled out at just the right time to increase the tension. I think my favorite scene, though, was Jack's p.o.v. as he's listening to Martin head back to the cabin - his perspective matches the reader's, helpless to do anything but yell, don't go in there!
And then I figured out you had also written the awesome Chris/Vin story I just read over at Blackraptor...color me impressed! I may just have to adopt some new fandoms and read the rest of your stuff!
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Date: 2007-08-31 10:49 pm (UTC)I loved the team's banter - Martin, Sam, & Danny in Part 2 had me laughing so hard I was glad I wasn't reading at work. I also enjoyed the description of Martin's ties as "a particularly drab acid trip."
The action was great - everything flowed quite nicely, the clues doled out at just the right time to increase the tension. I think my favorite scene, though, was Jack's p.o.v. as he's listening to Martin head back to the cabin - his perspective matches the reader's, helpless to do anything but yell, don't go in there!
And then I figured out you had also written the awesome Chris/Vin story I just read over at Blackraptor...color me impressed! I may just have to adopt some new fandoms and read the rest of your stuff!