Oh my, I love this story so much. Had to print out a hard-copy, so I could carry it around. I really liked all the OCs and the immersion into the culture Daniel grew up in. Fun to stick Jack there and watch him react. And the section where Daniel finally figures the mystery out just about did me in. And Teal'c had to watch him do it. ouch
So damn good.
*looks down, drags toe across the carpet*
You, uh, wouldn't be posting this as a prelude to part II would you?
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Date: 2007-11-10 12:08 am (UTC)So damn good.
*looks down, drags toe across the carpet*
You, uh, wouldn't be posting this as a prelude to part II would you?
*respectfully hopeful*